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#1 metaldevil

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Posted 23 April 2007 - 05:45 PM

Rules:
1. Obey XS posting policy.
2. One entry per person.

For numero ocho, you're to write a romantic/love-related poem.

Please give it a title.

Submission deadline: Monday, April 30th

Have fun! beerchug.gif

Edited by metaldevil, 23 April 2007 - 05:46 PM.


#2 StrictPuppet

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Posted 30 April 2007 - 07:15 AM

"YOUR EYES"

Lost in your eyes,
Captivated by your stare.
Ignore the gaze, he tries,
Look away? He wouldnt dare.

Does it mean to you, what it does to him?
He fears he may never know.
In those two green pools, he loves to swim,
Dreading when he must go.

Your stare is always remembered,
Whenever he goes to sleep.
Thoughts of you fill his head,
That he will forever...... keep.



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Posted 30 April 2007 - 07:41 AM

"On My Mind"

I think of you too much,
When I'm at work I wonder,
Whether you're smiling,
When I'm with another girl I wonder,
Whether you're laughing,
When I'm in bed I wonder,
Whether you're sleeping,
When I'm in the shower I wonder,
What you're wearing,
And what you're thinking.

I saw you today,
I wanted to say something,
But I'll wait till tomorrow,
To tell you how I feel,
That's all I know for sure,
I really hope I see you,
And I hope you feel the same.

And if you hate me,
And if our friendship dies,
And if the world ends,
Because of what I say to you,
Tomorrow and for all the days to come,
I'll hope you find your happiness,
Even though I'd have lost mine.

#4 metaldevil

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Posted 04 May 2007 - 12:22 PM

How about: you vote for me, I vote for you, and we call it a tie? sleep.gif *sighs*

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Posted 04 May 2007 - 02:47 PM

k...... metaldevil

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Posted 04 May 2007 - 05:33 PM

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It's a tie! ohmy.gif




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