Posted 25 June 2007 - 01:23 AM
Posted 25 June 2007 - 02:51 AM
Posted 25 June 2007 - 04:17 AM
*the "direct @..." is a bit confusing to me. If it's an email address it should be red too, right?
Posted 25 June 2007 - 04:33 AM
Posted 25 June 2007 - 04:55 AM
Edited by CJLee89, 25 June 2007 - 04:55 AM.
Posted 25 June 2007 - 05:35 AM
looks good. instead of "@", maybe use "at"? just a suggestion so people will not think is an email address.
Its already been posted. I will change that though for future reference. Thanks guys.
Posted 25 June 2007 - 06:03 AM
*EDIT* The one above just has to much going on. I was trying to do too much with to little space. Here is a less cluttered version that looks a lot better.
Edited by liquid-core, 25 June 2007 - 06:12 AM.
Posted 25 June 2007 - 07:03 AM
Posted 25 June 2007 - 03:50 PM
And the gamestop comment wasn't good or bad, just a general comment... I guess the color scheme is what did it for me..
Edited by Areohbe, 25 June 2007 - 03:57 PM.
Posted 25 June 2007 - 05:08 PM
I actually kinda like the more "cluttered" one better than the other. But hey, thats just me, either way it looks good though
Thanks for the comments safi. To me with everything going on its distracting. Theres no clear point of interest. It does get the message out a little bit better though.
Come on guys. Can I get some constructive criticism or comments? I'm curious if this is a good advertising tool. If it needs to be mixed up a bit? Let me know.
Edited by liquid-core, 25 June 2007 - 05:09 PM.
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