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> L O T W #5: Poem, Vertical Message
metaldevil
post Jan 17 2007, 05:54 PM
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Your task is to write a poem that spells out a vertical message with the first letter of every line. Space it out so it's easier to see the message. You can only use 2 words per line. Please give it a title.

Here's an example by StrictPuppet:
QUOTE(StrictPuppet)
Each line has two words, and it relates to the general message, which is the first letter of each line read down.

Saddened

Wilted mistletoe
Oblivious references
Nightly contemplation
Thoroughly exposed

Yellowed pages
Original contempt
Unyeilding challenge

Lonesome avatar
Outsider unwelcomed
Voracious interest
Empathic touch

Mysterious omen
Everything ends.

If you read it down it says "Wont you love me".


Submission deadline: Wednesday, January 24

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post Jan 18 2007, 08:12 AM
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Well I'll kick it so I dont forget like last LOTW


The Journey

Incoherent musings

Mistaken nuances
Incomplete tasks
Subliminal thoughts
Seductive glances

Yearning desire
Omnipotent spectre
Unrelenting pursuit
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post Jan 18 2007, 06:17 PM
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All aboard the friend-ship


Decisions can
Overwhelm me
Under your
Charming gaze
Happiness never
Eludes me

Because you
Are a
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post Jan 18 2007, 07:11 PM
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You spelled dutch wrong.

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post Jan 19 2007, 12:46 PM
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Blanket of Love

Drowning alive
Under sheets
Tears abundant
Can't breathe
Holding nose

Opening near
Venting covers
Escaped flatulence
Nostrils rejoice

FIN
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post Jan 20 2007, 05:46 AM
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American Way

So tempting
Unbelievable taste
Pride dying
Eating more
Reason subsided
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Succulent grease
Increasing waist
Zipper broken
Entering diet

Major Breakdown
Ending diet


waalah!
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post Jan 23 2007, 05:21 PM
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I'm Cold

Decadent life
Energy drained
Aneurysm imminent
Decaying gradually

Oncologist pessimistic
Negative outlook

Another test
Results positive
Rendered useless
Inebriated constantly
Vapid existence
Accepted fate
Last request
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post Jan 25 2007, 05:09 PM
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Vote now!
Voting deadline: Thursday, February 1

StrictPuppet: The Journey

_iffy: All aboard the friend-ship

hamwbone: Blanket of Love

wafflez: American Way

metaldevil: I'm Cold

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post Jan 25 2007, 07:22 PM
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post Jan 25 2007, 10:29 PM
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post Jan 25 2007, 10:31 PM
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...yours gave me such a vivid visual laugh.gif it sounds like what I do to my wife...
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post Jan 26 2007, 02:06 AM
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That is some awesome work guys....
Following along with his same dark theme from the last LOTW, My vote goes to.....
metaldevil

Its amazing how much can be conveyed in 2 words.
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post Jan 31 2007, 02:07 PM
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post Feb 3 2007, 09:15 AM
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We have a tie between hamwbone and StrictPuppet. Tiebreaker (someone that hasn't voted)?
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post Feb 3 2007, 06:06 PM
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