metaldevil
Jan 17 2007, 05:54 PM
Rules:
1. Obey XS rules
2. One entry per person
Your task is to write a poem that spells out a vertical message with the first letter of every line. Space it out so it's easier to see the message. You can only use 2 words per line. Please give it a title.
Here's an example by StrictPuppet:
QUOTE(StrictPuppet)
Each line has two words, and it relates to the general message, which is the first letter of each line read down.
Saddened
Wilted mistletoe
Oblivious references
Nightly contemplation
Thoroughly exposed
Yellowed pages
Original contempt
Unyeilding challenge
Lonesome avatar
Outsider unwelcomed
Voracious interest
Empathic touch
Mysterious omen
Everything ends.
If you read it down it says "Wont you love me".
Submission deadline: Wednesday, January 24Have fun!
StrictPuppet
Jan 18 2007, 08:12 AM
Well I'll kick it so I dont forget like last LOTW
The Journey
Incoherent musings
Mistaken nuances
Incomplete tasks
Subliminal thoughts
Seductive glances
Yearning desire
Omnipotent spectre
Unrelenting pursuit
_iffy
Jan 18 2007, 06:17 PM
All aboard the friend-ship
Decisions can
Overwhelm me
Under your
Charming gaze
Happiness never
Eludes me
Because you
Are a
Great friend
throwingks
Jan 18 2007, 07:11 PM
You spelled dutch wrong. 
hamwbone
Jan 19 2007, 12:46 PM
Blanket of Love
Drowning alive
Under sheets
Tears abundant
Can't breathe
Holding nose
Opening near
Venting covers
Escaped flatulence
Nostrils rejoice
FIN
wafflez
Jan 20 2007, 05:46 AM
American Way
So tempting
Unbelievable taste
Pride dying
Eating more
Reason subsided
-
Succulent grease
Increasing waist
Zipper broken
Entering diet
Major Breakdown
Ending diet
waalah!
metaldevil
Jan 23 2007, 05:21 PM
I'm Cold
Decadent life
Energy drained
Aneurysm imminent
Decaying gradually
Oncologist pessimistic
Negative outlook
Another test
Results positive
Rendered useless
Inebriated constantly
Vapid existence
Accepted fate
Last request
metaldevil
Jan 25 2007, 05:09 PM
Vote now!
Voting deadline: Thursday, February 1StrictPuppet:
The Journey_iffy:
All aboard the friend-shiphamwbone:
Blanket of Lovewafflez:
American Waymetaldevil:
I'm ColdGood luck, everyone!
wafflez
Jan 25 2007, 07:22 PM
hamwbone
_iffy
Jan 25 2007, 10:29 PM
StrictPuppet
w2kj
Jan 25 2007, 10:31 PM
hamwbone...yours gave me such a vivid visual
it sounds like what I do to my wife...
StrictPuppet
Jan 26 2007, 02:06 AM
That is some awesome work guys....
Following along with his same dark theme from the last LOTW, My vote goes to.....
metaldevil
Its amazing how much can be conveyed in 2 words.
metaldevil
Jan 31 2007, 02:07 PM
StrictPuppet
metaldevil
Feb 3 2007, 09:15 AM
We have a tie between hamwbone and StrictPuppet. Tiebreaker (someone that hasn't voted)?
Modderxtrordanare
Feb 3 2007, 06:06 PM
Hamwbone
StrictPuppet
Feb 5 2007, 07:15 AM
Congrats, hamwbone. Your gf/wife is one lucky lady.
metaldevil
Feb 5 2007, 02:13 PM
Congrats, hamwbone.
hamwbone
Feb 5 2007, 02:28 PM
im ready for the next one!
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